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It was my fifth birthday. My father organized a big party in the garden of our mansion, he had invited all his partners from my family company, who had brought their children too. I felt very lonely, I didn't know anybody, and it looks like if those children were entering me with their eyes, so I tried to keep as close as I could to my father.

My father wasn't  the kind of person who liked to show his feelings, he always looked like a man with a hard expression in his face and a strong personality, the perfect stereotype of all the members in my family. I was looking at him while I was holding strongest his jacket,  even if his look was cold and hard, I knew that for him, my newborn sister and me were all his world. Since my mother death, during the birth of my little sister Hanabi, my father did everything possible so that we never lacked the warmth and love that every child needs.

I felt totally lonely, all the guests were totally unknown to me, almost all were adults, and the kids didn't want to play with me, so I resigned myself to stay with my father and his friends throughout the afternoon.  Suddenly, one of the servants went to my father…

-Hiashi-sama, your brother Hizashi-sama has just arrived- after that he made a reverence and left.

My father took my hand, and took me to the entry of our house, where there was a big white car parked. When I saw who was lowering the car, I opened my eyes in surprise, I could see a man who was identical to my father, but with a kind face and a soft expression, he was walking to us with a smile.

-Brother, long time without seeing you- my father said to him, shaking his hand and with a little smile in his face.

-Onii-san, how long has passed? Five years?- The man said with a warmth smile in his face, then he looked at me- So this beautiful girl is Hinata-chan, you've grown a lot and now you're made a real princess!

I only held strongest my father's hand, suddenly I saw that somebody else was lowering the car and the driver was holding his hand. It was a boy who was very similar to my father and the man who was in front of us, with brown hair and white eyes, it was the color that identified our family. The boy got close to his father.  

-Otou-san, finally I could finish with my drawing for Hinata-chan- He said.

-Neji, I present you to your oji-san, my twin brother Hiashi- the boy made a reverence, and my father made the same- and she's the girl birthday, Hinata-chan- The boy got close to me and smiled, his smile was warmth and different, I felt my cheeks burn so I hid behind my father's back.

-Hinata-chan! Happy birthday! I made this drawing for you!- he moved closer to me with a smile and extended his hands giving to me a violet envelop, I took it and smiled to him poking my head my father. The boy looked at his Otou-san.

-Otou-san, Hinata-chan is as cute as you told me!- my otou-san and the man looked at each other and smiled, while the boy was smiling to me and my cheeks burned more…
The first page of my first fanfic, I hope you like it!!

It's an AU Nejihina :D Here is the spanish version: [link]

I dedicate it to my friend :iconxamaryllis:

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kibahina180's avatar
usualy i dislike nejihina but this is cute but i mean they arte cousins thats kinda wierd but it is the cute story so reading on